These were the corrections for the drawing,which was edited by the person who comment on my drawing(actually he was an ex-UTM Lecturer n currently studying PHD for Architecture in UK)!!Really Thanks to him for doing such a great job..hehehe..At 1st i don noe how to draw the fan in the 1st pic..n now i noe it edi..hahaha..this was his comment after editing the drawing..
--->>"see how the bed was distorted? bcoz the original lines were not pointing towards the vanishing point. in the correction (in red), i've aligned the bed so that it will properly pointing towards the vanishing point. this includes the bed posts, which was distorted as well.i've also corrected the perspective of the fan. the blade closer to us should be bigger, and the blades further away should be smaller. also, the centre part of the fan should be oval in a perspective, not full round."<<--- I so char hor!!Fan also don noe how to draw....hahahaha...luckily he guided me..hehe..
This drawing at 1st was so empty..which u can see at my previous blog.....But after edited by Azarimy(person who comment on my drawing) it become like that
<<==...hehehe.. It looked more LIVELY n looked good..hehe..thx to him..n this was his comment after editing the drawing..
--->>"there isnt much i'd have to correct in this drawing, other than it's too hollow and have no character/story in it. so i've added a few figures to illustrate how this drawing could be made livelier. adding more furnitures in would help too!"<<--- But actually at 1st i simply draw it...then don noe wan draw wat d..hahaha..but he made it looked live...(i like the FLOOR)hahaha
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wow.. the hall or walkway or watevr u call it in the second drawing... a little of something really make BIG difference to it...ur not that char... just that u have to learn more.. and u drew it out of nothing....walaoeh..
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